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*Gasps* You posted! I owe you a critique so here we go: First of all, I need to critique the glossary (because I can): Ye-ye = grandfather. I presume it's ...

It could be about notes, not necessarily scales for music. Every note in a scale could have a different spectrum of colour. Not everyone has synæsthesia for sounds. As a ...

Bravo, it was quite a delightful read! "Israel must be wiped off the map" Very powerful quote, but shouldn't it end with some sort of punctuation? Someone up in heaven ...

Okay, nitpicks first: MOVIE STORE CASHIER: It’s a school night, isn’t it? It’s a little late to be checking out movies. He had directed the question to REUBEN, but REUBEN ...

Granted, now you're confuzzled. I wish that your wish will be granted.

Banned for being the speaker of the forum.

I usually don't write short stories, but then I was bored and felt the need to practise writing coherently, so here is something short I did in an hour or ...

Yup yup! Completed!

It's nice with its elegant imageries, but I think it's a little too simple. Which isn't necessarily a bad thing, simple things are nice sometimes. Look at the lines on ...

Done! Next?

Okay, I suppose I'll critique the nitpicks first, then I'll get to my opinions on the piece. :) its cool grey metal fitted perfectly into her hand like it had ...

I use classical music composer names. D: Not necessarily Beethoven, and Mozart and obvious famous people, but there are those not as famous ones with fancy names and such... I ...

As everybody stated above, this was pretty amazing, and amusing. It's awesome how sometimes people never seem to empathize inanimate objects. The descriptions were heavy but wonderfully fitting, so th

Interesting concept. Okay, I guess I'll do the nitpicks first before I critique on the overall of the piece: The house burned in the night. The firefighters hung back, kept ...